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  1. koukouy on Chapter 1 Wed 01 Oct 2025 11:36AM UTC

    i genuinely love your writing style in this, i love it when authors utilise brackets like how you use them. im also really interested in the prompt of only the Expendable themselves knowing tidbits of their deaths down in the Blacksite. they're gonna be so traumatised ahahaohno

    also screw sidney. hopefully our lovely Expendable and friends can make it further this time with help.

    im also really curious about how Sebastian might be with our Expendable when they start getting used to his shop after (as im sure there might be more loops) making it there a few times. i just imagine Sebastian being completely baffled and suspicious, like "why aren't you screaming, you're supposed to be screaming, fear me now".

    also see that Lopee's here as well—or some entity alike to him that might be observing our dearest Expendable. excited for if that ever gets expanded upon.

    but, anyway, I'll be checking the tab i have this bookmark opened on and refreshing every week to check for updates ritually hehehe. hoping you'll be able to keep this fic going, so happy writing and good luck author! ❤️

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    1. LADMIN on Chapter 1 Fri 03 Oct 2025 09:56PM UTC

      Hi ur comment resparked the muse in my soul (i was still workin on like! plot summaries of each plotpoint, but writing out the Prose part of the story takes so much time bc im a goddamn perfectionist.) So. new chapter is in the Prose-Writing stage of work now.

      and yeah. our poor lil expendable is Not going to enjoy their time at the blacksite.

      I also have Plans with Sebastian. Soooo many plans.

      And you're correct! the weirdass Entity is Mr. Lopee bc i saw the cannon of him and was like 'is anyone gonna elaborate on that' and did not wait for an answer.

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