OH MY GOSH OKAY FINALLY GETTING TO READ THISSSS (yes, monty, you are your body! so true <3 the lil "what is. anaemic" bit did make me laugh but love that everyone is so accommodating!! poe you absolute disaster <3333 and sergeant lewis. sergeant lewis hiiii amazing teacher ever. love her smmmmmm
KEVIN NOOOO THAT'S NOT WHAT DIABETES IS T-T. the cake! love how monty and kevin ate it first– they would!! absolutely makes sense– and auhh the bestiessss god this is amazing as always
Aaaaaaaaaaaaa I’ve been waiting for your comments, they’re always so lovely to receive!!!
The anaemic bit was probably my favourite part to write, it was so silly and also felt like something that could genuinely happen in the show. Also, yeahhhh I really love sergeant Lewis <33. Making sure that everyone was accommodating was something I was as really certain I wanted to do, ‘cause it’s almost fulfilling a personal fantasy of being very young and in school and having teachers actually take you seriously when you say you can’t eat something because you don’t like it.
Poe being annoying is something I’ve had to consciously remember to put in but every time I have I do think it really adds nicely to the story, especially in this one with him basically swimming in Monty’s pasta and terrorising Edgar’s slice of cake (all while Roland’s cake is completely unguarded next to him)
And finally the cake section! That was very fun to write, I worried I made it overly dramatic in the last bit but I’m quite happy with it, I think it works quite well particularly for their characters. And the brief interlude with Kevin not understanding diabetes was something I just knew I needed to throw in, ‘cause it’s fun and sweet that in ep 1 he tells Roland that he’s gonna help him with it, but it’s also just objectively true that Kevin Does Not Know Shit About Diabetes
Anyway thank you for the comment!!!! I’m glad you enjoyed!!!! I hope you enjoy the rest as well!!!!
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