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  1. MidnightOnyx (Guest) on Chapter 4 Thu 30 Oct 2025 06:14PM UTC

    The overall narrative thread you've woven throughout these updates is utterly captivating, managing to balance high-stakes action with deeply intimate character moments. Your ability to maintain such consistent quality across multiple chapters is genuinely impressive, and the atmosphere of the setting is rendered with such palpable detail that I feel completely absorbed into the world you've created. The emotional beats land with precision, never feeling forced, which is the hallmark of truly skilled writing, and the pacing keeps me glued to the screen. However, as much as I ADORE every single word of this—and believe me, I check for updates multiple times a day—there's one thing that keeps nagging at the back of my mind. The existing diversity in this community is great, but I feel like we're missing a really important piece of the puzzle: where are the trans characters? I have such a desperate NEED for even a hint of trans representation in this vibrant cast. It feels like a massive missed opportunity given how beautifully accepting and complex your existing character dynamics are. I know you could write a trans character with such genuine respect and depth, and it would elevate this story from amazing to transcendent. I’m truly and utterly BEGGING you to think about adding a side character or even just a background mention in a future update. I’m so invested in this story, and seeing myself reflected here would just make it PERFECT. Please, please consider it!

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