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  1. Account Deleted on Chapter 2 Sun 25 Jun 2017 08:03PM UTC

    Okay, as you already know, THIS IS AMAZING! :D

    My favorite parts:

    (“Oh, well,” Shachi huffed, hands on his hips, “—that’s because I’m a Doctor, and apparently we Doctors can just up and do anything we want without telling anyone,” the redheads arms flailed out to his sides, “—including our BFF’s!”

    Yup, Law confirmed. Shachi was definitely pissed that he’d missed out on Law’s little performance.

    Law rolled his eyes and unlocking the door to enter his apartment, not bothering to look back at the Pediatrician trailing him. “Shachi for the last time, don’t use BFF. It makes you sound like a teenage girl.” It was bad enough the 28-year-old redhead was already ACTING like one. Law half expected him to start stomping his feet.)

    —Have I told you how much I adore Shachi? XD

     

    (“That is it!” Shachi’s head shot up, eyes narrowed and glaring at Law over the back of the couch because he’d used the forbidden nickname. “We’re breaking up.”

    Law snorted. “Then it’s good that we’ve never dated.”

    “Are you saying I’m not sexy?”

    “I’m saying that that thing you’re wearing should qualify as a new form of birth control.”)

    —Shachi, the walking birth control! :D

    (Law shrugged. “I like driving.”

     

    Shachi scoffed. “You hate driving. You don’t even own a car—you take the subway to work and use me like a taxi for everything else!” The shorter man trailed behind his friend desperately, trying to keep up with Law’s longer strides as the man started tossing his way throughout the apartment, grabbing things here and there. “Do you even know how to drive?” Shachi pinched the bridge of his nose. “Do you even have a driver’s license?”)

    —That's a good question! ;D

    ( “A stuffed bear? REALLY?” Shachi picked up the fluffy white bear, eyeing it curiously before having it snatched away by a scowling Law.

     

    “Bepo is a polar bear—the world’s largest land carnivore, who’d gladly eat your face off—thank you,” Law huffed, placing the fluffy carnivorous bear off his side.

     

    “It has a name?” Shachi’s expression was dumbfounded until Law tossed a murderous glare over his shoulder, causing the redhead to hold up both hands in surrender. “Bepo it is then.”)

    —I love that even as a grown, sexy man, Law keeps Bepo! :D

    (“Whoa, whoa, whoa, time out!” Shachi pointed out towards the hallway. “Bathroom—THAT way!”

    Law chuckled, shaking out the jeans as his silver eyes locked onto the Pediatrician’s own hazel pair. “What’s the matter Doctor?” he teased, “—afraid of a little ass?” Not like he’d actually planned on changing his pants right then and there—it was just too easy to rile the redhead up.

    “Ass? No.” Shachi scoffed. “Best friend ass—hell yes.”

    Laws eyes narrowed, mock offended. “I’ll have you know I have an excellent ass, thank you very much.”

    "I'm sure there are a string of broken hearts that can attest to that,” Shachi grudgingly agreed, before waving one arm in a slashing motion out to his side, “—but you dropping trou two feet away from my face would be a clear-cut male BFF violation.”)

    —I fucking love Shachi! :D

    (“Oh...” the dark-haired teenager groaned, collapsing against the counter, the remainder of his chocolate bar still clutched in his hand, “—fuck-me-sideways.”

    The greenhead only chuckled, “If you’re lucky.” Then promptly had to dodge the incoming candy bar.)

    —If we're lucky too. -Poke- this is a hint, M&M.

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    1. MarieMichaels on Chapter 2 Sun 25 Jun 2017 09:14PM UTC

      HINT TAKEN CATALOGUED AND FILED FOR FUTURE REFERENCE. lmao. No worries my little Monkey, we both know which team I play for. XD I love Shachi too, inner teenage girl and all. Him and Pen are my fucking boys. Lol. And does Law have a license...hmmmm....good question. The world may never know. :P

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