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  1. merrymelody on Chapter 4 Tue 19 Sep 2017 03:53PM UTC

    Aw, I got all excited seeing the update in my inbox! <3

    Love it. Particularly poor Curtis the lone sane man, and the return of 'do you love him?' as well as a resolution for Brian! I love how you wrote Alisha and Curtis btw, esp. the mix of Alisha asking for help and then with the insults lol; and Curtis and Kelly amused at Simon/Nathan, it's a lovely group dynamic you got across.
    I also love Simon and Nathan's characterisation - the phone thing and the reference to the unit makes perfect sense, as well as Simon/Matt; and Nathan on a permanent drunk.
    (With you on the Simon/Alisha thing btw, I've been working on a fic recently and it's really difficult to work around it in terms of how it affected the plot - which is weird, considering the ship itself doesn't really go anywhere.)

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