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  1. Ornery Otter (Greiver_Dhark) on Chapter 10 Sun 02 Sep 2018 09:57AM UTC

    Hi! o/
    I'm really enjoying re-reading this story, and just spotted a hilarious typo in the lower half of this chapter - I think it has autocorrected 'to say' as 'toast' so the sentence says: That wasn't toast that they had been entirely still, however.

    I just found it a funny typo lol, it took me a few re-reads of the sentence to figure out what was not quite right lol. xD

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