WAIT BUT HOW DID THE ELDERS DIE AM I MISSING SOMETHING...perhaps I’m not awake enough to be thinking this deeply right now. This was such an interesting read! The world building was great, especially how you had their whole coven just staying in one area. I find it interesting that the humans who are also living in the city didn’t really...do anything about the vampires or the wolves, but then again, if they’re so intent on taking each other out, I’m not sure that I, a puny human, would have done that much about it lol. I thought it was clever how you made them meet in secret and that you could still very much feel the danger every time Jongdae jumped over the wall just from all the precautions he had to take and all the worrying he had to do before leaving, after leaving, and then while returning. I also thought they were super cute how Chanyeol was always scenting him (even though in the end it didn’t really help things but I’m just going to ignore how the scent stuck with Jongdae and kind of made it harder to walk around the coven without being suspicious for now and stick with the idea that it was cute) and how Jongdae was always curling up in Chanyeol’s arms for naps or a snack ;; There were just so many cute moments in this and so many times where I was just surprised or shocked (THAT PLOT TWIST THOUGH poor Jongdae's brother and Jongin's sister ;;;;) or snorting or laughing, so I think you wrote this well considering how many emotions I felt haha. I also thought the epilogue was great, because even though it didn’t explicitly answer every single question out there, it still answered questions enough for the readers to be like “alright, Kris and Joonmyun will get together ONE day, just like Jongin and Taemin will get together ONE day.” At the same time, it left you creative freedom if you ever wanted to come back and write about this AU, so I thought it was a perfect wrap up. I could go on and on forever but this is already quite long and it’s quite late, so I just want to say thank you for writing this!
Oh shit, sorry if it wasn't clear. Chanyeol killed the elder by stabbing him through the heart with a wooden stake from behind. In the classic how-to-kill-vampires way.
Thank you so much for all your kind words. I really makes me happy to know you enjoyed my story so much! There are plans to eventually write a KrisHo side story, but who knows when that'll be. I am trying to get back into writing soon, hence the horribly late reply, sorry.
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