Okay, we all love these two dorks. We can have them fall in love the typical high school romance way, through the ol' heroes in peril method, or just have them bang each other out of context. But this? So raw and vulnerable and needing some sort of companion to vent to? This is so, so beautiful. I love reading about our poor todomomo struggle through a world where not all families are perfect and home isn't a haven. Having the two look out for each other and realizing there might be something more to their friendship is the perfect realistic buildup to an actual romance. I praise your "show not tell" method of writing; thank you for not overburdening us with information and yet giving so much detail in every sentence. Please keep it up, I would love to see what happens next!!
oh, you’re too kind! people like you and your lovely comments are why i pour my heart out into each chapter no matter how small. i’m so glad that you have enjoyed reading my story so far! 💖💖
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star_on_a_staff on Chapter 5 Mon 24 Dec 2018 07:03AM UTC
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