Comment on Butterfly

  1. The title of this chapter already had me wary...

    The amount of detail in every single scene is so well-crafted I am there witnessing the characters doing their thing and the deer and the view and oh GOSH I'M IN LOVE.

    Pathfinder's explanation of the deer being pests and the hikers talking about U.A. really contrasts their city lifestyle and I love it. Also that conversation with the hikers was multi-dimensional, okay? Oh man. Let me guess, the next chapter is called "the storm"?

    Comment Actions