Yeah. I've gotten a few comments like this, which is understandable. I didn't put that this included an OC because she wasn't ment to be. I know this is only 9 chapters in, but you seem like you won't continue, so I'll just say my intention was to make Rene just an older version of Rin, but me adding the two persons/personalities (later in the story) confused readers, so I definitely did something wrong. I'm not going back to fix anything anytime soon, but I'd still like to hear what you think should be changed to clear everything up, if you dont mind.
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Eclair1998 on Chapter 9 Tue 07 Jan 2020 10:55PM UTC
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