Okay - my reread took me four times longer than usual because last week was crazy (for everyone I'm sure) and theres the world, and also life, and just general maddness. But I'm so glad I reread because its so much better than I remember. The relationship you've got going with Sirius and Hermione, that kind of familal vibe but not quite - I live for it, so good. They're honestly some of my favourite characters to see intereact and you write them so well. And then there's the friendship you've got going between Ginny, Luna and Hermione - I love that too, even in the later chapters where you've included Lavender and Parvarti more - big fan. Also I love how you've developed Luna in this, and how she's not just like a cooky side character but like so much more. Also I kinda love her a Mikhael or rather how baffled he is by her - adorable. And your Fleur!!! I love her - such a badass. Honestly she's one of my faves too but she's often done so dirty but the way you've written her *chefs kiss* Also - that lil scene with her and Bill - theyre adorable - I love them - theyre like my fave cannon ship so I love seeing them being written so well . Finally your Viktor and Hermione are so cute!! Viktor rushing to Hogwarts to see Hermione - just all of it. I love the way you write them so much and I really can't wait to see where you're taking everything. Also I'm still super curious as to whats going on with Draco because they've had a couple interactions which were kinda weird and then the letters on top of that?? Curious? Love it! So good! THANK YOU !!!
Thank you! I just love writing Sirus and Hermione with any kind of relationship but here it feels especially apt as Sirius will survive. I like the parallel where they are both trying to emotionally develop at the same time. Hermione through her relationship with the girls and Viktor and Sirius as he starts to piece his life back together. More Lavender in the next chapter. Unpopular fandom opinion but I sort of love Lavender. She's a bit BAMF in her own way. There will also be more Fleur, for reasons that will become apparent in the next chapter :) All will be explained with Draco... eventually x
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