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  1. Vampire_3031 on Chapter 1 Wed 01 Sep 2021 08:53PM UTC

    You're right, I totally didn't notice the few Jemma's that had been dotted around, (I think I've fixed them all now).
    I do love Bonnie, but I only really loved her after a few seasons, in the beginning I think she's too judgy, and there's no way that Maya's going to just take the judginess. What really threw me was Bonnie's unwillingness to make a daylight ring for Caroline, she had to be persuaded and threatened Caroline with the fact that if she did anything wrong, Bonnie would take the power away. But for Elena, there was no mention of giving her the same conditions, which I thought was completely unfair. Plus I couldn't take both friends away from Elena.

    Just to clarify, Enzo is in love with Damon, Damon's still too heartbroken over Katherine to even see that he could have Enzo. I always thought that one of the big reasons why Damon was in love with Elena was just the transference of his feelings for Katherine to her doppleganger, which is why I opened the tomb early, give Damon a chance to get over Katherine before he meets her copy. I'll try to keep you updated on the other characters, maybe just throw a little mention or phone call in so you know what they're up to.

    I've been re-watching Teen Wolf, so they'll probably more references to it, but I see Caroline and Maya as having very Scott and Stiles best friend relationship, or like Christina and Meredith from Grey's Anatomy, where it doesn't matter how long it's been or what they're doing, nothing and no one will come between them.

    I'm glad you like the story, the next chapter will be up soon, and I appreciate your honest feedback!

    Last Edited Wed 01 Sep 2021 08:54PM UTC

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