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1. euphoriclinctavia on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Feb 2022 01:57AM UTC

   

   This was a great start! The only thing I'd suggest is using quotation marks for the dialogue. I had a bit of trouble detecting the speech.

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2. 1. orphan_account on Chapter 1 Sun 20 Feb 2022 02:02AM UTC

      

      thanks for your comment, I will take it into account, I always use the scripts but even when I saw the final result I noticed that

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   2. 1. euphoriclinctavia on Chapter 1 Sat 26 Feb 2022 05:14AM UTC

         

         well i appreciate you responding!

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