I don't think there will be any plot holes, (I have faith in you) but if I notice anything I'll let you know.
I understand the pressure of being mid posting something into the world, and obviously you will get better progressively so that's awesome! I'll be happy to read through the progress. I published the first long-ish thing I'm (still)writing because I desperately need to improve and I can see so many ways to improve the first chapters every time I re-read, so I for sure understand the feeling. I think with this kind of platforms it's kind of inevitable to get progressively better writing as the story progresses, especially in long works.
I'm also happy to read you, my Froggy friend! You keep writing and I'll be here happy to comment!
Thank you!! That means a lot :) I do have beta listeners, so I’ve got some people letting me know what makes sense/fits and what doesn’t hehe the grammar though is totally unbetad and I absolutely go and clean up sometimes. My format for one, I have gone through every chapter of this fic and rearranged it multiple times. 😂
Omg no fr like I feel like the start of this fic was written by someone else, but its only been 3 months?? (3 months of writing everyday, including other works, but still)
Concrit is sometimes scary to receive but its also literally helped me so much in figuring out this whole writing thing. So keep doing it!! Don’t let me get away with “the most country in all the nation” type shit 😭🤣
I found you tumblr and I'm losing it haha. It's so accurate. Also, yeah, I won't let u get away with it (perfectly knowing grammar is a struggle for me).
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