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  1. Tmaru on Chapter 3 Mon 24 Apr 2023 06:58PM UTC

    This is an interesting take on dina's experience while ellies is in California.

    depression, P.T.S.D, S.U.D.I, Suicide are very confronting and hard topics for people live through and read about. Maybe some trigger warnings in your chapter notes or tags just to help mentally prepare readers.

    But it is completely up to you, I am not trying to discouraging or be condescending or be rude and I really enjoyed the story idea so far so i am just trying to help or maybe be helpful.

    Honestly you can tell me to shove it and do your own thing and continue with your story as is.

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    1. The_Last_of_Sauce on Chapter 3 Sun 30 Apr 2023 05:27PM UTC

      Thank you for the comment and suggestion. I have added content warning tags. Hope it helps!

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