In the beginning I was so confused, then this fic took a baseball bat and hit me in the guts. I LOVE the chaos and suppressed grievance that colors the fic, like a veil we have to read all the memories through. The videos being a recurring theme, the private intimate moments, the confusion of past and present. Just like the stars looking like a homogenous dome above us, even though each one of them have different places in time and space. I’m so excited to see how this fic unfurls. You writing is great, and and the fine balance between denial, grief, confusion and assimilation to public and private belief becomes a cocktail with no tangibility and every strong emotion at high stake.
I think you captured exactly of so much I was directly trying to convey in this opening scene. It took me several iterations to start, but the confusion, intangibility, and chaos of it all really reflects the period in which all of the prelude is taking place. I hope you enjoy what's to come. Thank you for reading 🥰
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SomeAndrea on Chapter 1 Sun 07 May 2023 08:00PM UTC
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