Thanks for commenting! I did do some reading on caning before I wrote, and I did see plenty of warning about where to hit. I went with the abdomen and the parts you're really not supposed to eat on purpose actually - this Kylo is NOT good at safe BDSM. His goal is to cause as much pain as possible, but not leave TOO much lingering damage. So it was on purpose for him to hit the DO NOT HIT HERE bits. I plan to detail the wounds and such that Kylo left behind in the next chapter there will definitely be broken skin ;-;
but thank you so much for the information!!!!! I'm really glad you pointed out the no-no bit since that was my goal and I know I'm on track, I really appreciate it! <3
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slutpunk on Chapter 1 Tue 05 Jul 2016 12:06PM UTC
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