okay before i even begin talking abt my fav parts in the chp welcome back!!!!! it sucks what happened to u after the last chp but im glad you have ppl helping you out with all of that!! (if u need more breaks tho cuz of irl stuff its valid dw take all the time u need)
anyways now that thats done can i just say that i LOVEDD THISSS from the war room scene with everyone going ballistic and adora yelling over it (realistically it isnt the best but its a fic so im here for the drama like dt) to adora and swift wind bonding UGH I WAS ALL HERE FOR ITTTT
also loved the little moments with mermista and catra annoying perfuma even i started laughing a bit tbh. i do wonder what's going on with the ppl in the beginning tho (going after shera i suppose????) along with adoras sick vision
anyways like i said before i absolutely LOVED this chp keep up the great work!!!
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