The quiet click of bone on metal was accompanied by a less corporeal sensation; a sort of gently buzzing feeling of warmth, like snuggling up to a purring cat. --- I like the way you describe the warmth of having Red touch him as 'snuggling a cat'. It an apt description and really hones in on that feeling.
Interference or feedback or something--- yep, it's totally 'feedback' and not that you have feelings for Red. Nope, can't possibly be that. I love denial! "Now, put it in your friend's pocket." "husband," Sans hissed. -- you tell him Sans! Honestly, I share his annoyance.
"i f u c k i n' d a r e y a," Red whispered. ---- well, that escalate quickly. I wonder how this all pans out.
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Totem_123 on Chapter 2 Thu 29 Feb 2024 07:53AM UTC
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