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  1. AstrynSerene on Chapter 1 Sun 28 Jul 2024 06:40PM UTC

    This is AMAZING!! HOLY SHIT, this has been more than worth the wait.

    I don't read many fics that's written in first person, much less Catra's point of view. It's beautifully done, the way her thoughts are written out while still guiding the story along, much like the songs she sings.

    I love the already building romantic/sexual tension between them that neither realize has started. And I really love the way you guys have built the religion here. Those of us with religion based traumas are gonna be sobbing by the end- I'm sure of that.

    Also, Shado- Light Spinner bowing to Adora? To anyone?? WOW. THAT shows her devotion if nothing else, or how far she's willing to go to gain favor to Prime, whichever it is we have yet to see.

    I'm so excited to read this as it comes out! Beautiful beautiful job, you guys!

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