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  1. Chessalein on Chapter 2 Thu 05 Sep 2024 11:27PM UTC

    Your writing style is so amazing. I love every line, I love the pace and I love all the interactions. Most of all I love little Archimedes ♥

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    1. MeatballSander on Chapter 2 Fri 06 Sep 2024 07:56AM UTC

      That means the world, thank you! <3
      And Archimedes!!!! He doesn't appear often enough to tag but was fun to throw in the background of scenes. :)

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      1. Chessalein on Chapter 2 Fri 06 Sep 2024 08:37AM UTC

        And the fact that he is there, makes the worldbuilding perfect. You could kind of forget fast about him, but he is an important little detail in my opinion. Alone that Heavy cradles him shows that Archimedis might spend a lot of time with him, what means that he is often with the doctor.

        And I I have the feeling that Archimedis is an important thing to the Medic as a character. Medic is a more crazy one who does thing without batting and eye that seem... cruel, and not really normal or human (like we see in the comic), but that he has such a great love for Archimedis shows that he still is ja human who holds things dear even in front of others. He is like a badge that he as well has a weaknes, doesn't matter how lunatic like he seems at the first glance.

        And he is the cutest little cutiepie.

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        1. MeatballSander on Chapter 2 Fri 06 Sep 2024 04:00PM UTC

          Yes!! I was super conscious of balancing Medic's craziness and cruelty with the things he cares about - he's such a multifaceted character that'd it be a disservice not to. And Archimedes is such a little (and cute!) detail to throw in to aid that.

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