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  1. Oh, the premise ofnthis story is interesting!

    Everybody wants Chief, so NG ends up positioning herself as the "top bitch and Chief's main owner" so even though she has to share Chief, she still is seen as having a higher position than the rest, over Chief.

    A really exciting and interesting concept, I can't wait to see how and when Nightingale will "lay down the law" to the other sinners, as well as how ot will work this arrangement of hers with them when it comes to having (sexy?)time with Chief.

    The writing of Chief being a bit naive or perhaps just a bit disconnected from how others see her and the whole "social battle between the other women for Chief's attention flying right above her head" bit is everythinf I didn't know I wanted from Chief.

    Question though, NG isn't jealous of Chief when she is spending time with the kids, right?She only has an issue with the adult sinners(since they obviously want a romantic/sexual relationship with Chief), right?
    After all, Chief is the head of the Minos Bureau of Child Care for a reason, and she is the friend of all children.

    Considering the number of sinnders that seem to be into Chief(that aren't already into other sinners), I think NG can easily be dealing with 20 or 30 something sinners goingnafter Chief.That is a LOT of women.

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    1. Hi, I'm so glad you like to so far!

      The idea for Chief is pretty much a part of the canon (used to the battlefield brutality with Corrupters, less precise at handling conflicts/fights with normal human beings) with some extra on top. Basically her overly relying on the Shackles for communication, therefore struggling with "normal" human interaction.

      There won't be any jealousy with the kids. A few of the Child Sinners will be mentioned, but the only real reaction to it will be "she puts in a lot of time and effort, how is she not exhausted?".

      It will be mainly NG and Chief in a Situationship thing where Chief gets fucked by Sinners and Nightingale partakes/ enjoys the show. How exactly individual character dynamics will be handled depends on the Sinners. Each one with their own sexual preferences.

      So far I'm planning on adding Macchiato (Pillow princess/ Dom), Cabernet (StoneTop/ strong oral fixation), Chameleon (Dom/Voyeurism/Orgasm denial and control) and Countless Chelsea (Bottom/ Bondage and Collars) together.

      I'm open to wishes for more (female) Sinners, although I can't think of many specific kinks of fixations for most rn. So a specific topic for them is also always happily seen.

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      1. Well, since you're open to ideas...btw, no idea wether Chief would be top, dom or even flex for either of those.

        Langley(because let's face it, an argument between NG and Langley over Chief would be funny since NG is Chief's subordinate, so she is also subordinated to Langley who is Chief's boss.To see how Nightingale makes it clear, to someone above her in the same hierarchy, that she is above Langley when it comes to Chief's personal life would be interesting): Sensation play(imagine Langley using what she learned for torture, but here she uses for pleasure).

        Hamel: Foot fetish(I know, I know, kinda cliché but as a dancer, her feet usually tend to get attention so...) or praise kink.

        So far, these are the only ones I can think of.

        Last Edited Wed 21 May 2025 11:47PM UTC

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