Alright, new section here we go. Time to set you some exceedingly high expectations and get upset when they don't get met.
"Bayleef was blushing already despite her narrowing eyes, "You mean he actually… Did "that" with you? Fully?" Oh hell nah she's taunting Bayleef with that consensual shit, girl you didn't need to do that!
"Dropping down from the air with a Body Slam that Latias managed to see just out the corner of her eye" I'm not going to lie, Latinas you brought this up on yourself with all your taunts and jabs. Deserved.
"Because he was mine not technically first, but he is now." Dunno why, but this line feels super awkward to read lol
"A little sad about how it ended" Yeah you guys barely talked, y'all just taunted each other and ended up fighting when said taunts ended up riling one of you up. Leading to you guys trying to maul one another. Horrible turn of events, just horrible.
"how did things go with your first love?!" Oh my- Didn't Meowth get rejected hard by that female Meowth? James you didn't need to go there. Why is everyone hitting their friends "below da belt" in this story whenever something doesn't go right for them??
"Don't scare me like that, Latios" Yoooo it's my favourite Latino ("NOT WHAT I'M CALLED")
'Hmmph, I see. So, he has a girlfriend now?' He has WAY MORE than just a girlfriend, he's basically got an entire harem at this point who want his ass, get it right
"She leaned in further in a rather dominating performance that left Ash speechless as she captured his lips" Ewwwwwww I don't know why but I gagged a little when I read this. Which is funny, considering no other scene has given me such a visceral reaction up until now (not even the smut scenes).
"but did she attack you?" Yes, but because your girlfriend provoked her. To be fair she did deserve it but I dunno I feel like Latinas ain't telling the whole story here...
Alright I will say I'm not disappointed lol. Though I do still feel that 'early chapter syndrome' throughout this one, it's faded a bit in comparison to the other ones. I'm sure it'll get even better from here!
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