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As the two friends made their way down the street Kris brought up having a second brother in an offhand comment along with some slurs, Susie stopped dead in her tracks and yanked the they slash them’s iconic shirt collar back.

“Kris, the hell? You have another brother? Is your mom mormon or something? Or does she just like popping you little freaks out of her cooter?”

“What! No, I–haha”

“Actually that would explain a LOT.” Susie snorts, hitting Kris with her elbow with just scary purple energy force for it to be painful, Kris heard bones in their arms crunch like how their hand will be crushed in chapter 5 Lobotomy corp.

“Susie, Kristianity is very different from mormonism. Haha” Kris deadpanned, super cool and mysteriously like.

“Soooo…when can I meet this guy?”

Suddenly Kris was quiet, looking down at the ground, they uncomfortably shuffled their feet a few times before sighing softly

Susie’s face of teasing in jest was soon replaced with a more genuine expression

“Is he..uh at college too?” She asked, rubbing the back of her thick veiny neck, proportionately large to her head

They seemed to soften a bit at the concern for their feelings

“No. He’s just…we don’t really talk a lot. Let’s just say. haha” The non-binaryette made a quick “let’s go” symbol with their hands and scurried ahead.

Susie needs to find out more about this mysterious brother, but how? The violetpurpledinosaurette didn’t want to make Kris uncomfortable with excessive questioning.

Kris saw something, something flicker across Susie’s face and quirked an eyebrow. Rushing further up ahead

Susie has to go to Toriel, surely she has more to say about her own son.

They arrived at the Dreamurr’s residence and both said their goodbyes, immediately as Kris shut the door, Susie went stealth mode, jumping into the bushes, the branches scratched her up a bit but nothing some good ol’ toothpaste on the wound can’t fix!

This was a near fool proof plan! Camp out here til Kris falls asleep, sneak in, talk to Toriel, and understand the mystery brother’s whole deal.

Susie heard a grumble some where and jolted upright, ready to kick the intruder’s head in, but alas. It was just her stomach, oh damn, she should’ve brought some chalk, huh?

She was startled once again by the sound of the door busting open.

“Susie, I could see you jump in the greenery, Kris didn’t even fully shut the door.”

Toriel scolded, kneading the bridge of her scrunched snout.

“Heh..eheh..sorry, Ms.Toriel. Won’t happen again.” Susie turned to leave but was stopped by a warm hand on her shoulder.

“You could come in if you’d like. I’m not homophobic” Her voice sounded warmer, how it sounded the night she slept over.

“HELL yeah I’d like to come in!!!”

Toriel winced.

“Sorrry” Susie corrected, chuckling awkwardly. Falling behind Toriel and letting her lead the way inside the house.

Toriel sat her down on the all but too big chair in the middle of the living room. She can’t lie, it felt good being coddled like this, was this how Kris felt everyday?

Toriel asked Susie if she’d prefer Butterscotch or cinnamon tea and ended up mixing the flavor packets to create butterscotch cinnamon tea! This women might just be a genius.

Maybe mormons weren’t so bad after all, huh.

Right! Mormons, Kris, mystery brother!

“Susie what made you felt the need to..camp out in our shrubbery? Everything alright at home, darling? Need me to call anyone?”

“Hah! No I’m good, Ms.Dreamurr I got a warm chair at home to keep me happy! But Kris told me that they have two brothers.”

Toriel squinted, “Yeah?”

“I thought they only had…one?” Susie stated cluelessly.

Toriel laughed at that, loud and genuine “Oh, no no no! there’s Kris, Togore, Asri-“

“WAIT.”

Toriel blinked at her with shock

“TOGORE???? What kind of stupid fucking name is–..” Susie decided to shut up as she saw a short goat monster wearing the very same iconic green and yellow striped shirt that the red eyed they slash them wore everyday walk up from the basement stairs that she somehow just noticed were there.

The small goat looked familiar somehow.. did she recognize him ?

“Ma, could y’ be quieta’, please? M’ beggin’ over er’!” So this was Togore, the middle child of the Dreamurrs. huh?

Something about that thick Italian accent was striking, especially in a family where no other members had it.

“So who’s this broad, huh?” The male goat (Togore) growled

“Susie, get dressed, not even going to lie we’re selling you to Togore….”

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Susie quickly got on her beautiful neon green 14 dollar prom dress, it had rhinestones showered on the top with purple spikes along the rim. Adorned with some wood she broke off of the chair she kept at home. Breathtaking.

Susie stomped downstairs with a certain purple energy, claws clinking on the stair’s railing as the two goat monsters came into her field of vision.

“You DON’T look as badass as Chester but..sighs you’ll do.” Togore said, baring his very small teeth, Blank expression turning just a twinge more sour before returning to it’s normal state.

“I know I’m sold to uh…Tagore now but like..I can go see my family time to time right? Sheldon will miss me.” The indigonette inquired.

“He’s the youngest brother of the Cooper brothers, god I will miss him…always thought he was autistic, never got that diagnosis paper in the mail though..” Susie continued on about her autism sibling, Toriel’s hand found the purple girl’s shoulder for comfort.

“Okay shut up let’s go to the basement” Togore grabbed the indigo skinned, yellow toothed dinosaurian’s hair, dragging her by it.

What the!.. fuck! Graaah!!

The goat guy threw Susie down the stairs as he dived in after her, galloping to save the large statured minor girl, it kinda looked like that one time in the first chapter when Kris and Susie were just jpgs falling down haha but this time it’s Susie and Togore, that would be cool right? Keep reading. Please!

After Togore caught Susie mid air they soon hit the bottom of the basement stairs with a loud thud. Susie slowly opened her tightly shut eyes and found two saucers with cat like pupils staring right back at her.

She flinched at this, this guy was scary! What , the fuck!

“So are we gonna like, go in your room or what?” Susie adverted her gaze from the both figurative and literal goat.

Togore nodded, dropping Susie onto the ground without much care. He swung the basement’s door wide open, as Susie crawled in, she realized it smelled like shit and artificial banana flavoring. holding back a retch, still not quite being able to stifle a wince.

She looked up from the ground, eyes watering from the pure stench of the cooky crazy place.

There were huge British United Kingdom flags hung up that covered every wall, and shelves full of bongs and weed related merchandise. There was a gold figure that depicted a cartoon cannabis leaf with sunglasses on doing a thumbs up with enlarged looney tunes style gloves, flashing a weed chewing smile.

Maybe this “Togore’ guy wasn’t so bad after all, huh?

“Sick room but what’s up with the British flags? Aren’t you like, Italian American or something?” The brownette with purple skin asked.

“I like em’.” The white thing answered beautifully and simply.

“Okay but like, where do you even sleep?”

The smaller monster points to a stack of suspiciously moist and wrinkled newspapers near the corner of the room. Shit. Didn’t know this guy was RICH. The newspapers were subscriptions to luxurious wine brands!!

“Gulp.” Susie gulped.

She assumed the gulp upset Togore cause he began to get really mad for no apparent reason, his expression was the same as it always was but his head was as red as a red colored thing could be!

And black steam(?) was blowing out of his ears, and they were flapping quickly, so quickly in fact that they just looked like two big spinning tornados on each side of his head, admittedly, it looked badass as hell.

In a blink of an eye, around 2 minutes in the room was almost completely filled to the brim with black smoke! Susie was finding it extremely hard to breathe, but Togore seemed to calm down a bit.

“WHAT THE..HELL DID Y’ DO?”

Susie roared before the smoke engulfed the room completely, suddenly the violent badass girl was feeling lightheaded and before she knew it, everything was just..black, unconscious. In a deep sea abyss, could this be a Wing Gaster reference?

Think about it.

Then Susie woke up, and..this wasn’t Togore’s room? Wait, was she in a dark world?

DID TOGORE DREAMURR MIDDLE CHILD OF THE DREAMURRS OPEN A DARK FOUNTAIN?

Susie sat stunned, when her eyes came into focus she realized Togore was staring down at her, with those familiar slitted pupils, he kind of looked like a cat. Could this mean…wait…Catty. Fucking. Delta Rune! You are a whore!

Susie continued her gawking, before the goat spoke up.

“What?”

The large girl quickly shuffled upright, scanning her surroundings, nothing currently seemed to be jumping out at her as a threat.

“N-nothin’, let’s just..find the fountain.” The       said, brushing herself off.

Togore reached out his hand to help Susie up, but when she tried to grab it he pulled back.

“Lol” he spat.

She stood up and practically growled, not practically, sorry, she just growled, she growled.

The dark world was a messy swirl of orange and red blobs of color Susie couldn’t quite understand, a lot of walking, more than usual? Or maybe it just felt like more since she didn’t have her friends there to occupy her.

The two of them were making their way through an especially long area when Susie spotted a..pizza box? Ooh, an enemy? Finally?

In one swift motion she kicked the pizza box hard as fuck!!!

“Hey, man..I wasn’t even doing anything!” The pizza box said

“…But if you insist on fighting”

“Then get ready for a whole PIZZA of brawling!” The pizza box said, revealing a cloak and pizza looking teeth or something I don’t know, I’m sorry. I really do feel bad about that, please keep,reading.

Susie felt a pant of guilt at that, but it washed away when the Pizza box revealed its face because it was ugly! And gross! Also weird.

Nonetheless the sick nasty battle theme started playing, and Togore preformed his iconic “Togore-tackle” ACT, before Susie could even ACTin correspondence all she could see was black again, and then..a bright, glowing light overwhelmed her vision, it was almost piercing. And.. it was a giant Niké logo? Toby “Radiation” Fox, what , the! fuck! You really sell out that easy? You think your fans are really that fucking stupid where they wouldn’t see such obvious brand and product placement? What’s next? Final boss’ motif is going to be an anagram for the fucking Verizon logo!? And locking Roulxes’ hardest puzzle behind a paywall!?

Susie fluttered her yellowish whiteish eyes open and the enemy was DEAD. On the ground and all splayed out, tongue out, X eyes, you could see a little cartoon ghost rising above the poor guy’s body..Togore’s expression of pure Insouciance didn’t falter, yet he was still a filthy swooner.