Hello🤗!! First of all, thank you so much for giving us another Jay story😊. Poor little boy🥺, I foresee a lot of hurt/whump for little Jay😢💔, but also lots of tender loving care from Bridget, Pat and little Will🫂🥰💖. I really like that Bridget tries to get Will to give Jay a chance and that Jay also learns to lose sometimes.
Love this one: "Jay whines a little as he’s pulled away from her but quickly snuggles into his dad’s warmth. “I got you.” Pat says softly, cradling the back of his tiny head."🥹🥰.
This part at the end really get me. It's tender🥹🥰 and heartbreaking at the same time💔.
“Mama?” He whispers as they pass through the waiiting area. “Yeah baby?” She asks. “S’my heart brokeded?” Aww 🥺🫠🥹.
“No sweetheart.” She says, kissing his head. “It just a little hurt and we’re going to make it all better, okay?”😊
Looking forward to the next one. Thanks for writing and sharing 😘❤️.
Always more Jay! (and I love little Jay!) He is absolutely going to hurt and go through some very hard things but his family will be there every step of the way to offer him support and love.
And the balance between brothers is based on my constant struggle with my nephew and his lil sis. Cause he's almost four years older so he HAS to slow down and give her a chance but also it's not productive for him to let her win every time. sigh.
I love writing mean and inconsiderate Pat but its also so fun to write tender, loving Pat taking care of his little boys sometimes.
And poor scared Jay, not really understanding what's happening but knowing it's bad and being a little scared. And Bridget being terrified but doing her best to reassure him.
Thanks so much for reading!!! 🥰🧾
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