It wasn't your idea, but I didn't want Sanji to keep the secret to himself, especially if he thought the crew was in danger! So I wanted to add some more inner conflict for him to resolve before he finally makes a decision.
Thank youu!! I'm so glad!
lmao that's a funny thought, but Sanji didn't shave off his curl in the first chapter. Why SB didn't find the curl an important detail will be explained in a later chapter.
Well it's a great idea, glad it got put into this. And I'm intrigued with what's happening with SB and why he didn't ind the curl. I'm enjoying the added mystery. And I also love the fact that even tho you're raising my plot bunny into a full grown story, there's still plenty of unknown bits in this that I'm completely unaware of. Like I feel Robin is suspicious of Sanji about something. Not sure if she think's maybe he's Germa too or perhaps something else. Regardless it's going to be interesting seeing how everyone deals with this new threat.
I'm glad that you're okay with it! I was kinda worried that you wouldn't like all the changes I made to your plot bunny!
Of course, if you don't like anything, I'll do my best to change it and fix up the plot, so please don't be silent if this isn't where you want our story to go. I wrote this one for you, and I would hate for you to dislike how it turns out.
In this story, Robin wouldn't be suspicious of Sanji even if he reveals his past with Germa, since she knows who he is as a person. I think she's more concerned with the skittish way Sanji is acting around the guy and wants to get to the bottom of it!
I'm not worried at all. I don't think there's a story you've written that I haven't liked. Yes there are some that I've liked MORE than others but I haven't hated any of your fics, so please don't worry. I'm sure I'm going to love it.
And I'm being genuine with you, you're not getting any fake approval from me. I appreciate that you wrote this with me in mind, but had you said you wrote any of your other fics with me in mind, I wouldn't know the difference. This story feels as catered to my interests as all the rest. lol
In the interest of full disclosure, my interests apparently include: Stressed out, anxious and/or emotionally compromised Sanji. Suspicious ambiguous villain/alley character, Luffy doing that hat thing where you can't see his eyes but the reader knows he's piiiiiiissed. And protective Strawaht's. (Especially Zoro.) If your story has any of these in it, I know I'm going to love it.
(bonus points if Sanji gets knocked out or has to be carried like a little doll. lol)
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