Ahhhh thank you, thank you! What was my life before your reviews?
Okay. First of all. The whole graveyard thing. SO happy there's going to be a parallel. It feels like it's been happening a lot with both our series and it is just <3333 Can't wait to read what you have coming up! Also, the way you describe how Jyn is missing Cassian is beautiful. You're right. She's not missing him in a totally destructive way anymore. It has turned into some sort of longing - an ache, almost. Leave it to you to put it into words!
Regarding the bible verse and the somewhat 'heavenly omen' in the graveyard. I hope these things become more clear in the next chapter. I'm trying to do something symbolic here which I'm kind of nervous about. I really, really hope it pays off. Keep your fingers crossed for me!
Hahaha I'm so glad you liked how I write Baze. The whole bit with Chirrut and Baze still feels a little shoe-horned in, but there was no other way I could write it in. Happy to hear that it kind of worked?
"Cassian is adorkable with children and has a really fucking dirty mind" - This made me laugh out loud. Also, I appreciate your love for Kes, Kay and 'poor little Poe' :)
Ahhhh noooo that whole South American thing. That's totally my mistake. *runs and hide* What should I change it to? A Latin American thing? A Latin thing? A Hispanic thing? What is the correct term? Oh god, people, please help!
Also "can't wait to read what you have coming up"... yeah. You know. Coming up is a pretty relative term because I've written like, less than a quarter of it and now want to change like the first half of that quarter and it's such a mess and ARGH. I can absolutely see things unfolding in my head like maybe a silent film. But trying to get that into written for is just. Not Working At All. (If I should be as stuck with this texts as I am writing The Non-Hormonal Side of the Argument then God help us all because I know how long I've been laying that one off...) I mean, I even have the music for it all picked out (which is how I got to have a title despite not having anything else, haha...) - also I found a song that would be an amazing addition to your playlist both sound-and content-wise, thing is only it's in German and I've yet to find a translation into English - I'll probably just have to do it myself, I just have to share my amazement as to how perfectly this fits into this ship with SOMEONE and sadly none of my German friends is as crazy about Star Wars as I am ^^
UPDATE: I did at least finally manage to write a first chapter that I'm kinda happy with? So this still lacks like at least five other scenes I want to write, but I'm liking this first bit now. So I guess that's something ^^
And can I just say I love the fact you even changed that line at all - I don't think a lot of people would've even picked up on that, but thing is I'm just HORRIBLE at geography so whenever I actually do know something I just HAVE to rub it in everyone's face, sorry that you had to be at the receiving end of that ^^
Hahaha do not worry! Take your time! It took me ages to write "The Christmas Interlude" and "Light and Grace". I totally understand how you feel. And, yes, please, I'd be so interested in checking out this German song you've mentioned! Yay also to the first chapter you've finished writing!
And do not feel bad about correcting my mistake! While I was writing it, I did wonder if Mexico was part of South America. But like a dumbass, I forgot to double check and change it later. So thank you for pointing it out in such a kind and non-condescending manner. Same goes for the grammatical error I made. :)
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