I did, I found one where some guys reincarnated as Orochimaru, I'm just saying that there's A LOT like this and you both are great writers but the bias ruins it, if they EARNED it and wasn't given it, it would've been perfectly fine, like in arcane Jinx went through a traumatic event and trained and to get even stronger went through a near death experience to gain shimmer, you could've done something similar for Mikoto and NOT made her so op with no explanation, cause even with the MS she shouldn't be a match for Itachi or Shisui, and Kushina shouldn't be as fast as Minato, but you could've made her create seals to limit his teleports, just make it make sense and not asspulls power ups, I already left I'm just giving my honest opinion, you both write great but you've both fallen into the trap that Marvel is in, they have ONE good maybe two female characters yet they call themselves the ones representing feminism, they don't GIVE a reason to the strength of the women characters they just GIVE IT to them with no explanation or grounding it's just, "yeah she trained real hard so she's as strong as this guy" yet Arcane has 5 strong women who started weak(except VI) and they all become top tiers on par with all men except one and he wasn't even a man just a robot at the end
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Darkhilt on Chapter 23 Sat 04 Oct 2025 09:56PM UTC
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