Oh my goodness, this was sooooo goood! I loved all the little pieces of dialogue sprinkled in there from the movie, the welcome home exchange, and that little bit at the end ' “Second thoughts?” says Cassian, surprised. “Kay, I have no second thoughts. I asked her to come home and I meant it.” His lips thin into a determined line. “After all, I’ve come this far. I couldn’t face myself if I gave up now.” ', they fit so perfectly with these characters! Lovely to see a little bit of Jyn and Cassian's wedding, even if it does feel bittersweet knowing all the heartbreak that's coming down the line for them. It was so good to see Jyn in a better places as well, and teaching young girls self-defense is just perfect for her, now that you've put it out there I can't imagine her doing anything else. And yay for Poe! Poe is a sweetheart, and I completely understand his attachment to Cassian! ;) Looking forward to seeing the second chapter of this! :) x
Aww thank you so much. I worked really hard on the Poe scene and the wedding scene. So glad you liked them! Can't wait to hear your thoughts on the final chapter and I am so grateful for your support of the series :)
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