Whoa this is insanely good. The way you wrote Orochimaru’s rebirth feels less like a scene and more like a resurrection myth eerie, poetic, and full of quiet tragedy. You made him feel alive in a way that’s raw and unsettling, not just a villain but a cursed genius trying to outlive his own humanity.
I’ve got an idea that might vibe perfectly with the tone you’re building here maybe a way to deepen that “god trapped in decay” feeling. Where can we connect? You on Discord or Instagram?
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Alissasmith2 on Chapter 4 Mon 06 Oct 2025 02:05PM UTC
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