This is an excellent story, and thus far has been a really enjoyable read. I do, however, have a quibble: it's, "owe," and, "owing." "Own," and, "owning," denote that one person possesses something, while "owe," and, "owing," indicate a debt to someone. That being said, the story is interesting enough for me to overlook such typos.
If you ever find stuff like that please tell me, I want to get better at writing and can't really do so without people pointing me in the right direction :)
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JNDoe52 on Chapter 3 Wed 15 Oct 2025 04:36AM UTC
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