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  1. AmyNChan on Chapter 2 Mon 17 Apr 2017 06:00PM UTC

    Awww, this was a really interesting set-up, honestly. I loved Peridot's characterization!!! *^_^*

    As for an akuma, maybe Wordpress? A frustrated writer who's mad because no one will accept because she insists the multi-dimensional theory is real? X'D

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    1. CNote on Chapter 2 Tue 18 Apr 2017 02:17AM UTC

      That's funny. I don't know what that does to the fourth wall.
      What would her power be? Send people to alternate dimensions? Cuz that just makes things crazier.

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      1. AmyNChan on Chapter 2 Tue 18 Apr 2017 04:18AM UTC

        Perhaps it would be to make items come out of a hammerspace, which would be her version of the alternate universe theory. Like, making pockets in space to draw things from? I'm not entirely sure. As for the fourth wall? Completely obliterated. X'D

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