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1. Kaltan (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 24 May 2014 07:31AM UTC

   Love your writing, love that they're on equal footing here - both attractive and attracted, both taking some initiative....But it's kind of hard to read any of your stuff because there's no breaks between paragraphs.

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2. 1. x_mourning_star_x on Chapter 1 Sat 24 May 2014 11:41PM UTC

      

      There are breaks when I write it, they just don't transfer onto the site. I'll try to fix it.

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