Thank you for the criticisms! I'll take them in consideration, especially slowing down. About proofreading, unfortunately it's a step I'm taking alone, so it will be limited by my abilities. I'll try harder o7
Liam will soon enough fell the repercussions of not understanding exactly what her power does. As for the book, an e-book would be much more convenient. She can't have it that easy.
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esfirraaa on Chapter 4 Fri 14 Nov 2025 08:15PM UTC
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