Oh, so this is the comic script you were talking about, huh?? Yeah, sometimes scripts turn into something more lol I’ve never done a comic by myself, I’ve only written the script (that was fun!), but I’ve had a few turn into full blown fics on me. Anyway, I’m excited to dig into this, radiostatic is such a deliciously sharp and toxic ship!
I absolutely love the way you’re describing the setting. In just a few words, you’ve set a very smoky, noir tone. I’m envisioning this in my head like the background is like those old black and white shows, but the characters are in color lol
Anyway, I’m loving that this is from Vox’s pov. I think I’d told you before, Alastor’s my baby of HH, so I’ve mostly read fics from his pov; I’m enjoying your take on Vox! He’s such an asshole lol They are so snippy and bitey with each other, love the dialogue. I think you’re doing a great job of capturing their characteristics, I can absolutely see them having this conversation.
HE CALLED HIM VINCE lol I can see him spinning up over that one. Take that Vincent, you racist snot, he gave you a nickname, knew it’d get up under your skin, and you liked it lol
Alastor IS feral lol I love him.
Love how you’re building the sexual tension here. Vince wants Alastor, and that want is laced into every second of the moment, and I absolutely adore how that is translating into homicidal intent in both men.
“Two men.
Two smiles hiding murder.
One spark that was never going to go out.” <—This ending is perfection. Chixy, this fic’s a banger, I can’t wait to see more chapters, and I hope to see you write other fics too!!
OOOH STOP IT
awww this means the world to me ♥
I'm sooo shy right now. I'm incredibly happy to know that someone genuinely enjoyed something I finally found the courage to write and share.
And yes, I fully intend to make these two hate and love each other in the uniquely intense way that only they can
So far the story has been from Vox’s pov, but starting with chapter 3 and on, it will shift to Alastor’s
I sincerely hope I can maintain the quality and keep them as in-character as possible.
Thank u so much for your words friend, you really made a difference for me to keep going
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