The final chap just wanna made me kick myself coz I didn't see it coming despite the hints (totally thought Tobin was crushing on Gray at chap 4 oTL but oof, love the hurt/comfort on that chap, s'kinda my weakness there)! It's so sweet nonetheless, very simple and subtle... There's just something touching about Lukas being able to express stronger emotions like happiness for once, and the last paragraph have such a lingering effect, it really warms my heart and puts a smile on my face for the morning, thank you! :O
I actually did see the teasing shippy undertones in most of the chaps (and enjoy 'em, o Lukas, you deserve to be happy TvT) though I'd thought it might ended up as an OT3 with Forsyth and Python or with Gray and Tobin (coz threesomes are rare... though maybe not so much in this fandom considering there's one ValLeonKamui fic and two ForPhyLukas fics already x'D) (and on the note of ending, I'm surprised at the inclusion of Gray x Clair :O I appreciate that, I quite like that ship~)
The story on your bf is adorable xD And Lukas is such a bae, I was a wee sad when I found out Clive was his only support option (with no understanding to boot! D'x augh, at least you tried, Clive...)~ Also, Jesse/Luthier would be a crack ship I'm willing to read. :P
*bows* Again, thank you for writing and sharing this! I look forward to your future works~
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ceruleanhail on Chapter 6 Sun 04 Jun 2017 11:56PM UTC
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