I love how you portrayed Michelle! I'm not sure she would've suggested flying around with him, but this is your take on her so whatever. Anyway, love it so far! Michelle dealing with a crush like that is SPOT ON, I definitely see it happening like this in the actual movies if it was out of her POV.
Thank you! The portrayal of Michelle feels very important to me, especially when we've seen so little of her, but it does mean there are some liberties taken! I chose for her to go with him just as a jumpstart to their relationship. But dealing with a crush? We all know how that feels, so I'm enjoying writing about the awkwardness and denial of it. But I'm glad you're able to see some comparisons with how you feel the movie would deal with it. Thanks for the lovely review!
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