This first chapter is as sweet as a Butterfinger, but I can't be sure. I'm sitting at the desk wondering whether I should let myself go with the (currently) happy flow or brace myself for the inevitable storm that's coming. It's still a bittersweet beginning. I think that's going to linger for a while. At the same time, it's a really hopeful beginning. All Might has such an amazing support group, and the students' efforts to put this all together for him, no matter what he looks like, makes my stomach warm.
I'm wary. We know something is going to go down, but exactly what is going to go down is hard to tell right now. William Howard Wright, I am watching you. I do enjoy your writing style. I love how it flows together between action and description, and I'll readily admit that's my favorite aspect of it.
Ashido is a beacon of light. I'm glad you've incorporated a number of the students in this, even for a little bit where you've captured their personalities, and Bakugou's immediate understanding of the situation when Izuku tells him, sublime. Filled with so much anticipation!
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