Oh my gosh, I love this!! I adore the premise for it (because a), you're right, it would be so insanely expensive to feed him, and b) Peter is enough of a self-sacrificing idiot to go hungry to try to save money), and the fight scene is written so well. I rarely read fight scenes that I feel like are realistic (as realistic as they can be in a superhero universe) and still follow what's going on. My favorite line was "He grins back at Rhino, dimly aware that his mask is torn just enough to show his mouth. His teeth flash, bloody and feral and full of sharp edges and conviction- conviction that he won't go down easy, that he'll take Rhino down with him." Like wow, what a picture. It's so incredible. Also, that cliffhanger is intense and I want to know just how pissed Tony and May are going to be about this. Thank you so much for posting!!
thank you so much!! i was thrilled when i opened up my inbox and saw your review; it always makes me happy to see people enjoying my work enough to leave a comment. and i'm so happy you noticed that line!! it's one of my faves for this entire story tbh. i hope you enjoy the next chapter!! (as soon as i get time to finish it lol)
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Bluemnms on Chapter 1 Tue 12 Sep 2017 02:09AM UTC
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