My god I loved the this fic! The summary drew me in and in loved it! The gang cukture and custom blended so beautifully with the ancient world and I loved it! But I love how they're all about but spreading peace and o OCD rather than chaos and anarchy so they're More like hiploes or green peace. No wondering the government has hates them :)
The Christian allusions Aden wonderful! I'm catholic myself but I always loved the similarities between Egypt's religion and Christianity! I love Yugi as Mary orb magdalen one fin my favorite historical figures (she was a prophet. It a white!) and how they perfectly fit the ones who have them as well as the importance of protecting ones name as in Egypt names had power.
I als love but Yugi's role as Keepe of the king's heart! And how he's consort/ queen/wife when whore to the king but he actually has power and respect. His jstory b is to love and comforting everyone not just Atem and yeah with a job Allison thet and having the i outback up a front Atem Needs someone like Yugi in his life. A sn they all love him for it! The language Ian also fsbuloisbas is the story telling in Bengining I was worried for yug Sidney husband position but this story shows but the two what's I NBC end suefsce isn't What's beneath and I love how we verb thet through seto's eyes--and how Iran so much deeper than the cruel king. The character s devekopment is spot on and by I love the theme of kissing touching endnote different kinds and forms of love and how even though Yugi is in love with Seto Atem is still husband soulmate. I also lovebirds Yugi's character he's kind and sweet (our beloved Yugi) but he shows their is freedom in obedience least to Atem I to he's also a wicked and wanton little minx not because of a past or because been fieced to but because he wants to and Atem is just as bad! The pacing And plot were wonderful and I love but it! This could've been a oneshit and I'm glad there's still more!
I tried to give off the Jesus vibe while still sticking to Atem's character, and I hope I succeeded.
I hate how Mary Magdalene is painted by the church as nothing but a prostitute, and Yugi deserved a better role than that. He is kind and sweet, and everyone loves him for who he is, not who he has sex with.
Yeah, since he couldn't wield the Puzzle with Atem, I still gave him a pretty significant position within the ranks. In Egyptian mythology, there are five parts to the soul, and the ieb - the heart - is one of them, so I was like 'Okay, Yugi should definitely keep one of those safe, why not the heart?' Actually, it's probably what kept him alive at the end lmao.
I am used to writing from Seto's pov and I slipped a couple times into it, but I thought it necessary for the feelings I was trying to convey. Well, they are not married in the traditional sense here, but you could consider that as an aspect of their relationship.
Yugi has always enjoyed sex, whether he is having it or watching others have it. (In manga canon, I will never forget Yugi totally being down to watch porn Jou lends him.)
Technically the main storyline is over, but I hope you will like chapter two just as much lmao. c:
You did! Very well i definitely got a savior/Jesus give from Atem both the son of acorn but also the heaviness of the burden he bears (it's a reason I've Alayna been a faithful person--the hardships he had to endure)
Oh god yes! She was PROPHET not a PROSTITUTE! There were a bunch of female prophet but many of the stories irked got caught hanged to make me the faith more "roman friendly" which pissed me off! And usable Yugi deserved a much better and more respectable role. I love how in this he's basicsllg Atem's queen. Yeah and the heart is the most sacredness in Egyptians mythology (that's the ripen tiger him in my fic as well--onkg he Ian the inter of peace and satisfaction to the king's heart but keeper sounds so much better! And by yeshbit probably is what saves Atem's life in the end.
Well I loved it and he and Atem may not be married but thet makes them have a Moreno open sex Life so it works. And I love thet abkit Yugi!
I csnt wait for chsoter two I have no doubt I will enjoy it just as much!
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