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  1. "He can’t help but admire the aesthetics of the inner workings, and wonders if it was Soong’s intention to make the inside so beautiful. He smiles at himself, finding even Data’s insides appealing. Well, they are."

    I really loved this sentence! It's very powerful to me. Especially since I also find Data's insides wonderful. :-)

    Is it just me, or did you intend to put some sexual tension in here? Cuz it's pretty damn strong...maybe IT IS me. I mean...I wouldn't mind coming back to find Lore in the nude.

    This is really intense! I'm so worried about Data and THE BABY MELON! IT KICKED!! Awww....proud papa Data!

    Great job, as always. I really love your writing style! <3

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    1. mui

      Glad you liked it, thank you so much!! <3 It seems we share the same interest in android insides... :D there's just something about them!

      I totally meant to add a bit of tension here! No I really wouldn't mind a naked Soong brother either, and like Geordi, I would help myself to a look or two. :P Especially when the object can't see him looking.

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      1. Excuse me if I sound a little out of turn here, I honestly don't intend to be and I absolutely love this story by the way. It's just that while I concede that Lore is a great criminal character – cruel, embittered, damaged and a mercurial sociopath, I honestly can't see him as sexually alluring. While there are some evil villains who are indeed aesthetically pleasing I struggle to find a eunuch who is as smooth as a shop mannequin with no sexuality programming in any way 'hot' or 'sexy'. But that's just my humble opinion of course.

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