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  1. inbatcountry17 on Chapter 2 Wed 15 Nov 2017 07:32PM UTC

    EXCELLENT SECOND CHAPTER!

    Another great fight scene. I really loved the exchange between Lily and Bradford. And Bradford ordering the tea! The dialogue in general! There's so much good stuff in this chapter!

    Again, I can't wait for the next!

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    1. ornithomancy on Chapter 2 Wed 15 Nov 2017 10:59PM UTC

      This chapter went through a lot of changes in its initial stages, but one thing I knew had to happen eventually was the 'Only most of them.' moment. It might be one of my most favorite exchanges I've ever written.

      I promise next chapter won't be as sad. :)

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