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  1. Sora_Tayuya on Chapter 10 Thu 30 Nov 2017 10:25PM UTC

    ..........WHAT?!? They...are just letting him...go? Like that?!? Oh gods no he's completely likely to find the nearest edge and fall off into the lava. It would be a wonder if he made it so far as the bottomless Abyss in Waterfall.

    : ( at least Lust is there...? Maybe that will help. Frick, I don't even know. Gods my heart.

    I appreciate Slim's steadfast and maintained desire to just lie somewhere until he dies. This is not as severe as active suicide watch (while that still should be on the table).

    ["You like bones, doggy? I’ve got two hundred and six that I don’t need anymore; you can have a few.”] I am encouraged by the maintained desire to not actively harm himself, but rather just to keep letting himself waste away. That lethargy serves him well to prevent fatal action.

    Also maybe...maybe Lust just needs to /take/ Slim home. Or, somewhere. I mean...I hope Lust doesn't end up just leaving him. Worst case, if he doesn't let himself Fall Down or actively harm himself, is he'll get vindictive and try to place blame on Lust for this or something. So, rehabilitating and taking care of Slim, while still dangerous, is probably Lust's best bet to ensure everybody's safety. Plus Slim won't want to stay here in SF anyway, not with the key players who forced that cruel torture on him.

    ! Lust!Papyrus (Pink?)...so Lust doesn't want to leave Slim, thinking he'll Fall Down. Well. Yes.

    Oh no tears oh

    [“Oh,” said Lust, noticing. “Don’t cry. No, wait. Maybe do cry. You must have a lot of grief to work through. I know it hurts, but you can’t stay dead inside forever.”

    “Can if I’m dead outside too.”

    “Come on, don’t say that.”] I continue to feel vaguely encouraged that he won't harm himself if he keeps up great lines like this.

    UL PAPYRUS. I LOVE HIM. GAHG

    Oh no the collar oh gods. Well...well, while it serves as a reminder of his brother now...maybe...he can get therapy and some counseling, and then be able to let go of it one day? So, it can be a good thing.

    [“A collar?” said Lust, then mumbled as he climbed the stairs, “I’m the last guy in the Underground to kinkshame ya, but you and your bro were not very good at safe, sane and consensual.”] Oh gods yes

    Pink! Yay

    Unnecessarily and unreasonably sexy- lol, you sure do have the way to write and depict Underlust characters down pat. XD

    "Maybe it was all a trick and once they got him back to their own territory they would torture him to death. That would be nice." I'm really getting into his down-thinking and feelings right now, lol, this is till sad and tragic, but kind of adorable and funny too. Aw.

    Aww, is that it? A (good?) ending, certainly, but I'd love to see a chapter continuing, either immediately or fast forwarding.

    I have heard many authors and artists refer to Lust!Papyrus as Pink, so no worries.

    I hope Slim is happy and is cared for nicely in Underlust. *big thumbs up*

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    1. wolfbunny on Chapter 10 Thu 30 Nov 2017 10:52PM UTC

      Oh, that lava might have been tempting :3 Fortunately his autopilot totally bypassed the Waterfall abyss, or else this might have ended very differently X3

      I'm most worried for Alphys, because Slim might take it into his head to try to get revenge. There is a lot of blame to go around. Lust for telling people what happened, Toriel for decreeing the punishment, Alphys and Undyne and random guards for carrying it out. Hopefully Slim is too lazy to seek revenge by the time he's recovered enough that he actually could, or primarily blames himself (or even finally comes around to actually blaming Razz to some extent). He could still come to a bad end. I hope Underlust has a robust mental health support system.

      >you sure do have the way to write and depict Underlust characters down pat
      Thanks ^w^ I haven't read enough of them to feel confident X3

      This was the best, happiest ending I could manage after all the horrible stuff :3
      Hey, at least the other skelebros were killed in pairs so there's nobody else mourning their bro ;w;
      I wouldn't mind adding an epilogue but idk, I'll have to see if it manifests X3

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