This is so great. It's hard to see the OT3 so hammered by Time, but it's great to see that they still work around it. I love Trevor the Tractor Hacker--that has a nice ring to it. And your dialogue IS fantastic.
I think relationship conflicts that revolve around loving someone and wanting the best for them are fascinating, and yet quite painful, especially with these three.
Trevor is very much based on my brother, who also has trouble focusing, uses music (including the grateful dead, thanks to my dad) to help him stay on track, and is interested in white hat hacking. So he's pretty easy to write :P
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