Comment on Lisa Doesn't Get to Sleep

  1. IJPB (Guest) on Chapter 2 Mon 11 Dec 2017 08:52PM UTC

    Awww, I wanted to see more of the in between. You're skipping not only the immediate aftermath (and a chance for normal taylor to fuss over a delirious Lisa) and the waiting, the part where the pink mist faded away and they kind of have to dance around the issue that- yes, that happened. Yes, it felt great. At the time. Yes, something... very important, might have happened. But damn. It had felt amazing? Wait, stop.

    That's also important, I think.

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