Comment on the trouble with local newspapers and oral sex

  1. Laure001 on Chapter 1 Fri 15 Dec 2017 08:56AM UTC

    I thoroughly agree with NB. (Yes, this is my second comment. I just re-read this story.)

    We want more! I'd love to see the conversation after the "I still love you, this is so bad for me". Of course it will be a mushy conversation totally unessential to the plot. But you know, we are here reading Darcy /Elizabeth fanfiction. So we have nothing, absolutely nothing against mushy conversations unessential to the plot. :)

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    1. ClaireLily on Chapter 1 Fri 15 Dec 2017 07:23PM UTC

      (can i just say it's awesome you guys are interacting?)

      (and that i am delighted you re-read?)

      yes, definitely, more is coming. the moment after darcy's confession will come too. in this story, we know about her feelings, so we already know what her reply to darcy's confession is. but, if in the next chapter it's darcy's pov we're dealing it, it's essential he learns of lizzy's feelings. does it make sense? lmao. also, he may need it, poor guy.

      thanks for re-reading and re-commenting!

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