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  1. Oh my gosh I love this idea so much!!! I absolutely adore how you wrote Talia, how she listened to her father until their disagreement was too big, and her love of Bruce too great. I loved her sneaking Jason to a hidden Pit, it was perfect!!

    AND JASON!! Poor Jason, I felt so terribly for him. But I’m so happy that Talia was there for him.

    I am INCREDIBLY excited to see where you take this, I am loving it! Thank you for sharing :)

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    1. Arguably, Talia should have delivered Jason to Bruce as soon as she got her hands on him/was made aware of his existence (depending on whether you go with the UTRH annual or the Lost Days version of how that happened), but she's deeply loyal to her family, and I can respect that as a part of her decision-making process.

      Yeah, Jason's not in a great way right now, but this is automatically better than what actually happened--he has a familiar authority figure/parental figure taking care of him.

      I'm excited that you're excited!

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