I absolutely love what you're doing :D I like the world you've set up - Bloodfire's and their many abilities, pack structure (alphas and betas). Of course, I also love John and Rodney's interactions so far, with John surprising Rodney with his math abilities and his degree "in something useful". I love that John kind of likes Rodney, or at least doesn't mind him, and can recognize at least a couple of Rodney's good qualities. I look forward to seeing them interact more :) I also really enjoy John and Jack interacting. The two characters are so alike and I do think they could be good friends if given the chance. I'm also intrigued by the mystery of what exactly happened to the original expedition and what that means for the second one. Atlantis recognizes John! Good :D I'm so amused that their first day in Atlantis and already Rodney is going, "Don't touch that!" and John is doing so anyway *grins* I'm really excited for this!
Thank you! Hope you like the continuation! I like John and Jack's interaction. They're similar in some ways and yet different in others. It was a pity we didn't see much together in canon!
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popkin16 on Chapter 1 Thu 08 Feb 2018 07:29AM UTC
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