Comment on Bloodfire Book 1: Arca Pandora (Pandora's Box)

1. Account Deleted on Chapter 2 Fri 09 Feb 2018 01:28AM UTC

   Wow, fascinating start! Love the worldbuilding you've done here, can't wait to learn more about Bloodfires and how they would cope in Pegasus. I lol'ed at Rodney being envious instead of afraid of John. Can't wait to learn what happened with the original Atlantis expedition.

   If no one else has volunteered, I can do some basic SPAG beta, and pointing out some inconsistencies that pop out here and there.

   Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing! ♡

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2. 1. athalara on Chapter 2 Fri 09 Feb 2018 06:58PM UTC

      

      Many, many thanks! I'll really like someone taking a good beta look at this. It's so difficult the see the mistakes yourself, specially with English as second language! If you're still interested, please write me at atlanteia @ gmail . com. I also have a Facebook account, if you prefer (if you do, ask me the name by email, please, since it is under my real name and another email).
      Thank you!

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