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  1. I’m+bad+at+commenting (Guest) on Chapter 1 Fri 09 Feb 2018 02:00AM UTC

    I!!! Love!!! This!!! It’s so cool! The wings are so cool, and I like how u didn’t make lance just liek a ‘surprise ur a mermaid’ thing and kept like slow mutation! So cool. Anyway I love this and can’t wait for more! <3

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    1. FlamingPotatoArson on Chapter 1 Sun 11 Feb 2018 11:37PM UTC

      Thanks! I thought insta-evolution would be a bit over the top, so I made Lance have a few mixed traits. Chapter four coming up!

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